here is my research proposal which need rewriting in an academic level and divided according to the provided exemplar

I wrote this proposal but I feel it is still not master level of research proposal. I might did not consider some significant points the proposal must has. therefore, I will do the IRB and observation instrument later. I will send it later to just some simple edits it to be relative to the proposal.

the research design need to be from Leedy, P. D., & Ormrod, J. E. (2013). Practical research: Planning and design. Boston: Pearson.