Hello Robert, you should remember this question that you answered for me about a two weeks ago. I need you to do some editing please. Here is the feedback from the instructor.

***I have read your journal several times. I have so much feedback I do not know where to even begin. Let me start here, this is how I would grade it according to the rubric as it sits right now; 0.5 – 0.5 – 0 – 1 – 0. I hope this shows how little you still understand this project. What you handed in to me was a great introduction to the rest of your review. You spoke little to nothing of the actual article that I asked you to review. There is a lot of work that is needed with this, I strongly encourage you to read the journal article again and then also read the grading rubric so you can see what I am grading on.***

So please discuses more about the article and reefer to it.

I will attach the journal that need to be reviewed and the grading rubric and the journal review that you wrote, so you can edit on it.